Feedback

Last Friday we received feedback from the teachers about the music video and the ancillary products. Our video needed some work because the narrative structure was unclear at times and was hard to follow so we experimented by incorporating some photo shop images of a phone which contained messages saying why nobody could come to London, but as a group we decided that we didn't want to add them and instead we may do some re-shooting or rearrange the footage we already have in a different way to make the narrative clearer. Plus we were taught how to add transitions and motions to slowly zoom into shots making the video more conventional and not as boring as shot was the same.

My ancillary products need slight adjustments. Some of the fonts are unclear and do not fit in with the rest of our groups fonts so that's something I am going to need to change. Also I am planning to add some effects to some of the photos on the tour date poster I created and on the calender because the photos are quite plain so I may use photo shop to give them a washed up rough edge look as that is a convention of indie rock. I also need to do further research to ensure my products meet the codes and conventions of this chosen genre.